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The Haunted house - By Ava & Madison

Ava, Madison and Amy are walking down the road to a halloween party but they get lost and Ava says,

“I think we are lost.”

Madison says, “should we go see if anyone is in that house?”

“This is not cool,” Ava and Amy said.

Amy, Madison and Ava walked up the stairs.

Madison said “I think it is haunted”

“Come on let's go in,” said Ava.

“No, I'm going  by myself,” said Amy.

“You can’t go in by yourself, we are coming too,” said Madison. Someone in the house called out,

“Help! Help!” The three girls ran into the house. As soon as they got in they raced up the stairs. The stairs were old and rotten, as Amy stood on one of the panel broke off and she almost fell through.

At the top of the stairs they opened a cupboard door, and to their surprise they found a little boy stuck to a chair. He had duct tape around his feet and his arms.   

The girls untied him and carefully pulled off the duct tape. He said “Thank you for rescuing me.” They all ran down stairs, taking a big leap over the hole. “BOOOOOOOO!! We got ya!!” said Luca. “It was just a prank!!” The friends all partied at the house.

The end

The cloud Castle

Wanaka

MY SPORT

Olympic Poem

Friendship

Strong, helpful,

Racing, passing, riding 

Volley ball, water polo, respect, gymnastics,

Fast, nervous, confident

Swimming, competing,

Equestrian.

BFG Art.

We have been reading the BfG with Mrs Hughs. We had to  cut out the BFG and Mack a town or clouds.

My Speech

I think that if I qualified for the Olympics I should not go because in Rio there have been some bad things going down for them. Some people have been robbed and kidnapped. It is a dangerous place. I would like to go but it is so scary so I would not. If I was selected to go as an athlete I would not go! No! No! No! You could be bitten by a mosquito which makes a disease, a really bad one. I could even be killed by them. No, I know I don't want to go, 100 percent.

There is a virus in Rio called zika, which is spread by mosquitos.  It affects unborn babies and they are born with big health problems. It makes a baby's life really, really bad. I would not go to Rio in case I got the disease because I might have to stay in the hospital and I might not be allowed to come home to New Zealand.

Some of the Olympic village was not finished properly when the athletes arrived.  The buildings are very close together and no one likes them. When the New Zealand team arrived at their Olympic village they had to fix them up themselves.   There is also a lot of rubbish in the water which makes it dangerous for some athletes to compete. I would not like to be a rower or a sailor in those stinky water ways.      

There have been some robberies and kidnappings happening which has been scaring the athletes.  The Australian athletes had a fire in their accommodation and when they went outside some people broke into their rooms and stole things. If I was an athlete I would be really mad that someone had taken my stuff. I bet they didn’t think someone would rob them when they were outside in a fire.

I think I should not go to the Olympics because that has been some terrible things happening.  I told you why, but here’s a reminder. There has been a virus, fires and stealing. I don’t think I would feel safe at the Rio Olympics, so I would definitely not go!  

cross country 201

At the cross country we had to run the yellow track. I was behind Issy but she got me because Harmony ran with me so I was not allowed to pass her but i still got 7 place. It was at Gabriels Gully. I was really proud of myself. We came on a  a school bus I sat by Caitlyn and Grace. I hope I will get to go to South Otago. If I was to go I would run as fast and I would train every day. Fingers crossed for me.

My term 3 learning goals

• To use topic sentences and good supporting ideas in my persuasive writing
• To practise my speech really well so that I know it and can present it with confidence
• To learn my 2, 5, 10 and 11 times tables off by heart
• To participate really well in our class dance on dance night
• To get fitter, faster and run further in our cross country

OUR INVERCARGILLCAMP

At the velodrome we got a photo with a steel player called Wendy.

 At the Museum we and lunch we sat by a big TV thing 

At the museum we see a tall shell. Aria, Amelia, Caitlyn and I were sitting in it.

At the museum Caitlyn and I took a photo.

At the museum we got a photo with a tuatara

At the marae we took a photo under the gate.

At splash palace I went down the slide.

At the end of the slide we got a photo

We got up on a step and we jumped off it.

We had a photo in our bed.

We got to do the rakau sticks.

We stood by a carving for a photo. 

I felt a bit tired so I sat down

This is a photo of Henry.

We had lunch at Queens gardens. 

My BFF s - Caitlyn, Luca, Maddy, Katie and I.

This is my poppa David. He is cool.

My koru family

Mum and Dad are surrounding Harmony and I.  They are protecting us.  Harmony is near Dad because she always goes with him.  I hang out with Mum.

Gym Fest

My term 2 goals

¨ To start my paragraph with a topic sentence

¨ To split numbers when I am adding or subtracting

¨ To learn the correct tikanga and rules for staying on a Marae

¨ To skim and scan over a text to find out information

¨ To give everything on school camp my very best effort and have fun!!!

My Visual mihi

Ava's Mihi

Ava's Anzac Poem

Swimming Reflection

Hide and seek

I can see birds chirping. I will run if she got me. I will scream for my life. I would run for my life. I lived at last .

10 Things About Me

My Swimming Goal

My term 1 learning goals

¨ To have my reading success signed every day and bring it to school

¨ To learn how to dive into the pool

¨ To my facts to 20 very quickly

¨ To use lots of interesting words in my writing

¨ To add neat flicks to my letter in my handwriting

I love to read

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